Thread:ToonLandia/@comment-36546683-20190125211602/@comment-36546683-20190125222934

Ways to improve is:

1. You don't have to capitalize every word you say.

This comes to mind because when I read some of your comments in Animation Battles Fanon, I can hardly understand what your saying at times. The words you mainly should capitalize are "I" and "I'm." Another thing to add is that you must capitalize only the first word of your sentence, and also names like "Ruby Rose" or "Zack." After you say the name, you can use lowercase from there. Companies are also put in mind for this like "Nintendo" or "Rooster Teeth." And if you are feeling fancy, nicknames can be capitalized as well.

2. When you write, the " * " mark you use is irrelevent.

Yes, when writing plays this can be used, however when writing fights you could for say:

Flash struck down the armored avenger, causing the ground to shake.

Instead of doing:

*Flash punched down Iron Man.*

*The ground shook along with the attack.*

It saves alot of space and time, making your writing experience much more comfortable. I know it might be easier to do this, but the end product won't look as polished as you might think. I suggest keeping it as a long paragraph, and when the fight rises in action, use the ENTER key to write the next one and so on.

~Hope I helped, Universe.